ES ice berg
Hi Evie, an amazing choice of words. It was great! Bye, from Mirryn.
Wow: you have created some dazzling imagery, Evie. Clever writing, well done. Next time, be aware of repetition of words; you have used ‘sea’ several times.
Superb writing! I love all of the powerful imagery and the range of senses you’ve used.
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